wightstrakerjohn's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Reaching the stars]

Great animation, but music and pacing don't work

It's very well drawn, and the story is short but sweet, but it obviously suffered due to the time limit. The pacing is too fast, as is the music, so the animation strikes me as more of a distraction than a story. Why not make your own version without such contraints?

Lambi responds:

I may eventually do that, but Ive got other stuff to do at the moment.

[Hellcraft]

I liked it

Well animated, I recognized the music so that's a plus for me. In terms of plot it's a little lax but no matter. If you get a good story going with this series you could really take off.

Keep up the good work!

[Picard]

Decent, for something that disingenuous

Stylistically this animation is great, if not a little short. In terms of plot...well, apply yourself. It's obvious you could make better.